Amanda Cohen, Group Siren blog link
https://amandacohen58776528.wordpress.com/2018/02/22/blog-post-3-scrum/comment-page-1/#comment-5
Hi Amanda,
I like your colourful use of language because it helps make your blog’s text flow more easily and keeps the interest of the readers.
You explain what the scrum development involves in short easy to understand sentences which is good for someone unexperienced. You also say how it effects you but you don’t explain how this also would effect your team, other than the workload is easier. I think explaining how it can effect the team in more detail would be more benefitual to people who don’t already have experience with working in scrum. I did however, like how easy it was to understand how scrum works with individuals and people who don’t know scrum can as least relate to how it effected you personally.
Your motivation for using scrum as the method of development doesn’t say why you would use scrum in the first place. Yes you did clarify your reasons for choosing it but why would someone else choose it? Especially if there are other methods of development that they could choose instead. You need to explain why this method provides more value than any other methods, since you exclaim that this method is your preferred method. You also say you were introduced to other methods but then you stop? This closing statement doesn’t make sense to me as it makes me feel like your about to tell me what those other methods are but instead you leave me wanting more. If this was your way of saying there will be another post for this then i give you a thumbs up since it makes a could cliff hanger.
Overall, you are missing a picture in order to complete this blog post. But i like your way of thinking and it becomes intuitive when you describe how things could go wrong in a project. I hope to see more good posts like this in the future and I am also sorry if it sounded like i didn’t think your post was good! Becuase it is and does provide value to other people!
– Natasha Bianca Mangan.
Programming Games 